http://whyevolutionistrue.wordpress.com/2012/11/16/steve-pin...
is a book that I expect to be especially helpful for Hacker News participants. The book isn't finished yet, but Pinker's lecture on how to write
http://video.mit.edu/watch/communicating-science-and-technol...
includes a convincing critique of Strunk and White.
Students who have read Strunk and White should read two other critiques of Strunk and White,
1) the essay "50 Years of Stupid Grammar Advice" by Geoffrey K. Pullum,
http://chronicle.com/article/50-Years-of-Stupid-Grammar/2549...
and
2) Adios, Strunk & White: A Handbook for the New Academic Essay by Gary and Glynis Hofman.
http://www.amazon.com/Adios-Strunk-White-Handbook-Academic/d...
http://www.amazon.com/Adios-Strunk-White-Handbook-Academic/d...